Out in the garden,
Flowers everywhere.
Out in the garden,
Bees in the air.
Out in the garden,
Worms in the ground.
Out in the garden,
There isn’t a sound.
Out in the garden,
I feel the spring breeze.
Uh-oh I feel it coming,
A great big sneeze!
ACHOOOOOOOOOOO!
Spring is here!
Wow, Zoe. What a cute poem and beautiful painting to go with it. Thanks for sharing with us!
I love your rose, Zoe. Your description of spring is wonderful!
Very nice poem. “Uh-oh” and achoo make the poem cute.
What a sweet poem–I like the funny twist at the end, Zoe! 😀 Such a pretty flower!
Hi Zoe,
That’s a really funny poem. I like it because it IS quiet, and I like it that you add a sneeze. And there ARE worms, and I also like the rose you painted. And someday I would want you to teach me how to make a poem like that.
Love, Madison
Great rose, love the sneeze!
You included everything great that comes in spring. The sneeze is such a funny thing to add to the brightness of this poem.
This poem shows the joy of spring
This is such a cute poem! Great job finding rhymes! I love your flower too!