When Mommy caught Brother and me
Sneaking candy before tea,
She revoked today’s desserts,
Which made Brother yell in angry spurts.
Brother wanted to cry out to Granny,
But I was known to be very canny.
I had hidden some candy in the shed,
And we shared some before bed.
Very fun poem, Titus! Way to go!
Thank you for reading my poem. I appreciate the support.
Titus, this is so funny!
Thanks for the encouragement.
I like it because it is silly.
Way to go Titus. Great poem and candy!
Thanks, Mrs. Lancaster!
Hahaha Titus that’s funny. Good job!
Thanks, Mrs. Sanelli.
Haha! Who’s the Brother? Great poem!
It would definitely have to be Lukey, but it’s not a true story. Thanks for your comment!
I know, it’s gotta be Lukey! What kind of candy? Keep up the good writing! Is this a true story?
Kit Kat and Twix, but it’s not a true story. Thx for you comment!
Love it Titus! It has a sneaky, playful spirit!! Keep writing poetry for us! 🙂
Thanks, Mrs. Ribergaard!
So funny–will read it to our kids tomorrow, I know they will LOL. 🙂
Very very sneaky and funny poem! I like it!
This reminded us of when Charlotte and Gerdie eat candy and crackers in bed in All of a Kind Family. Thank you for sharing, funny!
It reminded me of that scene too!
Really great job Titus! Super funny, My favorite rhyme was when you used deserts, and spurts.
You made us laugh Titus! It is really funny poem👍🏻🤣
Titus,
I love your poem. I like the part about you being canny, so you. I am sure the desserts was all worth it too. 👏 Good job! Keep writing more so Natalie can be inspired to write one.
Thank you for your comment! Looking forward to seeing you tonight!
What a funny poem! You have nice strong rhymes!